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Kill the darkness
I don't need it
Fearing it
will only feed it

Make it grow
And twist around
Make me scream
without a sound

Infect my life
Turn me to stone
Remove my friends
Till I'm alone

"No one needs you"
It says to me
Got to break it
Got to flee

"You're pathetic"
It whispers still
Got to fight it
Got to kill

"I will win"
Comes it's voice
"Feel pain or surrender,
Make your choice."

So what to do
Give up,relax
Let darkness take me
So it'll stop its attacks

Or continue to struggle
And not give up hope
Resist its strength
And try to cope

This question lingers
Every day
When darkness asks
What to say

It might be easy
To let it go
To stop living
To end the show

But I endure
And keep up the fight
In hopes that one day
I'll find the light
©2006-2009 ~NikouNobara
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ok so..here's another one..I'm really not much of a poet...stories are my specialty but oh well...

Here you go, feel free to criticize or compliment as much as you want :)
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so true and beautifull i like your word usage instant :+fave: !

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hope...that word came to my mind as I was reading

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Drop me a critique please!
:crying: i think its beatiful
This is a great poem. It's words are more power than I think you realize. Adding it to my fav.'s

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HOPE, A FALSE EXPECTATION OF SOMETHING TO HAPPEN THAT NEVER DOES! = (
it's really good ^^

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thats not that bad, nikou.
but me, i hug the darkness and use it to my advantage. >:3

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this is really touching, it like...i dunno i just get it:) its cute

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